Next Installment of My Evil Fanfic

Well, I worked hard and managed to finally get this next chapter written in my WIP, only been stuck on it for about a month now. Not sure if it works or not, I had to accomplish quite a few things plot-wise and all within the point of view of a character that I find tough to write for. Writing it forced me to try a few new things - which I haven't really done before, such as a fight scene. Hope it works.

Previous parts of MISS EDITH's REVENGE or what I like to call my evil fanfic, can be found here:

[http://www.livejournal.com/users/shadowkat67/37475.html#cutid1]

Warning: graphic violence and language, rated R,
no sex, no ships. Action takes place approximately two or three months from the last installment. Point of view - Buffy. Also completely un-betaed.

( Chapter 3 Miss Edith Plays with Dolls )

Let me know what you think. Thanks!