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Dec. 2nd, 2017 10:50 am1. Cold is getting better. Sneezing now instead of coughing and have runny eyes and nose. But hey, progress. And I can breath, without feeling like six or seven bricks are sitting on my chest. Was very afraid it would become bronchitis. It hasn't. Yay.
Also, oddly, brandy, cough drop, hot tea (in a cup together) helps. Even more so? lemon, hot tea, and honey.
2. Finished Are You Sleeping by Katherine Barber, which is a mystery thriller about how social media can be disruptive to one's life.
Didn't like it. Besides the previously cited factual errors, the writer has an odd love of the word "spit". Which she uses periodically throughout the second half of the book. It wouldn't have been so noticeable if:
* It wasn't the only word in the present tense. But alas...
Example?
"I can't believe that you just did that," Josie said.
"Did what?" Lanie spit.
[Lanie spits a lot.]
* It's only used in regards to Lanie. And always instead of the word "said". Apparently Lanie spits a lot. Seems highly unsanitary. Considering she's in her 30s, with a husband, and a kid, I find it bid odd. Also why would you want to be anywhere near her? Every time she talks, you'd be covered by spittle. Somewhat disturbing.
I have no idea why the editors didn't pick up on it. And substitute the word said for "spit". Standard writing advice is not to substitute other words for said, unless absolutely necessary. And not to use anything, unless you have to. It's annoying to the reader.
The writer also rambles. It's very repetitious. And the plot meanders. And...the style is basically third grade reading level in that you won't have to look up any words nor will it further your vocabulary. Inarticulate traditionally published writers who write in this sloppy style, annoy me. Because I know this book had a legion of editors (the writer lists them in the acknowledgements) but I can't imagine what they were doing exactly. It wasn't line or copy-editing. Possibly marketing? Ugh. This is a recent and highly annoying publishing trend. Books traditionally published prior to 2000 didn't appear to have these problems.
I was disappointed. But a lot of people loved it. Did get some good advice from a random Amazon reviewer, provided in that off-hand sort of way..."Note to self, stop buying books based on the reviews. Instead read a sample chapter first. Also, stop buying books based on Oprah recommendations, this is the third book I've read that she recommended and I hated." (I have no idea what Oprah recommends, I don't follow Oprah. But, it also applies to other people asz well.)
Currently reading Hellion by Beatrice Small which is a lot better written and edited. (Spat is in the correct tense for example. And the writer seems to have a firm grasp of vocabulary and her historical facts.) It's a historical romance not a mystery novel like the above, proving that the mystery genre is highly overrated and the historical romance genre is highly underrated.
3. Off to get my hair done at 1PM. Been procrastinating, because expensive and I don't really like strangers touching my head and figuring out what to say to them for an hour or two. But, alas, necessary -- my hair looks horrid. And I do like the colorist, also liked the hair stylist -- but she moved back to California on me.
4. Television? Daytime Soap - General Hospital has a rather brilliant and somewhat horrifying story about a pair of identical twins, where a mystery organization paid a psychiatrist to map one twin's memories and implant them on the other one. Basically he took the memories of one man and put them inside his brother's head, replacing his memories completely. The psychiatrist did it with computer mapping technology, and his rational was to find a way of treating dementia and altzhiemers along with memory loss.
One of the identical twins is Jason Morgan -- a long-standing character. He's a hit man who is also the partner of a local mobster, along with the mobster's best friend and enforcer. Five years ago he got shot and thrown into the harbor by the villain. His body wasn't found and he was presumed dead.
The other is Andrew Cain, a well-decorated navy seal and hero, who went AWOL and missing a year prior to Jason's shooting.
They implanted the hitman's memories onto the navy seal, so that Andrew now believes he is Jason Morgan and has been living Jason Morgan's life for the last five years. While Jason has been heavily sedated in a hospital in Russia.
It's more complicated and far crazier than that of course (hello, soap opera), but I find the story idea fascinating. Sometimes fascinating story ideas pop up in the weirdest places.
Also, oddly, brandy, cough drop, hot tea (in a cup together) helps. Even more so? lemon, hot tea, and honey.
2. Finished Are You Sleeping by Katherine Barber, which is a mystery thriller about how social media can be disruptive to one's life.
Didn't like it. Besides the previously cited factual errors, the writer has an odd love of the word "spit". Which she uses periodically throughout the second half of the book. It wouldn't have been so noticeable if:
* It wasn't the only word in the present tense. But alas...
Example?
"I can't believe that you just did that," Josie said.
"Did what?" Lanie spit.
[Lanie spits a lot.]
* It's only used in regards to Lanie. And always instead of the word "said". Apparently Lanie spits a lot. Seems highly unsanitary. Considering she's in her 30s, with a husband, and a kid, I find it bid odd. Also why would you want to be anywhere near her? Every time she talks, you'd be covered by spittle. Somewhat disturbing.
I have no idea why the editors didn't pick up on it. And substitute the word said for "spit". Standard writing advice is not to substitute other words for said, unless absolutely necessary. And not to use anything, unless you have to. It's annoying to the reader.
The writer also rambles. It's very repetitious. And the plot meanders. And...the style is basically third grade reading level in that you won't have to look up any words nor will it further your vocabulary. Inarticulate traditionally published writers who write in this sloppy style, annoy me. Because I know this book had a legion of editors (the writer lists them in the acknowledgements) but I can't imagine what they were doing exactly. It wasn't line or copy-editing. Possibly marketing? Ugh. This is a recent and highly annoying publishing trend. Books traditionally published prior to 2000 didn't appear to have these problems.
I was disappointed. But a lot of people loved it. Did get some good advice from a random Amazon reviewer, provided in that off-hand sort of way..."Note to self, stop buying books based on the reviews. Instead read a sample chapter first. Also, stop buying books based on Oprah recommendations, this is the third book I've read that she recommended and I hated." (I have no idea what Oprah recommends, I don't follow Oprah. But, it also applies to other people asz well.)
Currently reading Hellion by Beatrice Small which is a lot better written and edited. (Spat is in the correct tense for example. And the writer seems to have a firm grasp of vocabulary and her historical facts.) It's a historical romance not a mystery novel like the above, proving that the mystery genre is highly overrated and the historical romance genre is highly underrated.
3. Off to get my hair done at 1PM. Been procrastinating, because expensive and I don't really like strangers touching my head and figuring out what to say to them for an hour or two. But, alas, necessary -- my hair looks horrid. And I do like the colorist, also liked the hair stylist -- but she moved back to California on me.
4. Television? Daytime Soap - General Hospital has a rather brilliant and somewhat horrifying story about a pair of identical twins, where a mystery organization paid a psychiatrist to map one twin's memories and implant them on the other one. Basically he took the memories of one man and put them inside his brother's head, replacing his memories completely. The psychiatrist did it with computer mapping technology, and his rational was to find a way of treating dementia and altzhiemers along with memory loss.
One of the identical twins is Jason Morgan -- a long-standing character. He's a hit man who is also the partner of a local mobster, along with the mobster's best friend and enforcer. Five years ago he got shot and thrown into the harbor by the villain. His body wasn't found and he was presumed dead.
The other is Andrew Cain, a well-decorated navy seal and hero, who went AWOL and missing a year prior to Jason's shooting.
They implanted the hitman's memories onto the navy seal, so that Andrew now believes he is Jason Morgan and has been living Jason Morgan's life for the last five years. While Jason has been heavily sedated in a hospital in Russia.
It's more complicated and far crazier than that of course (hello, soap opera), but I find the story idea fascinating. Sometimes fascinating story ideas pop up in the weirdest places.