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shadowkat ([personal profile] shadowkat) wrote2005-05-21 11:02 pm

Revenge of the Sith & the art of the story -what works, what doesn't

First off - lovely evening with cjlasky. We arrive at the movie on time. No problems. No line. Plenty of seats. Don't know what people are talking about?

Participated in a raffle at the movie house - for the starbright foundation. You put in a dollar each, received a nice little star with a number on it. Then before the previews of the movie begin, they held a raffle. The winner receives two movie tickets. Cjl looked hopeful. I tell him, hey, so not going to happen. I've participated in these things before, the odds are like one in a million. I never get my name picked. He didn't believe me, until the ushers took off and went to collect from other movie theaters..."Wait, this is with the whole movie house?" "Probably, look I figure it's a buck for charity, I'd have put it in regardless." He nods.The ushers come back and hold the raffle. I pull my little star out of my coat pocket...they call off four numbers, and what do you know they are the same as the ones on my little star. "Anyone have these numbers they ask?" "Uhm, I do. Or I think I do." They come forward and take my little star. "Yep, you do." People applaud. I turn red in the face. And what do you know, I get two free movie tickets to see any movie at any time at any Regal Theater until 12/31/2005. (We're aiming for Batman Begins, June 19th.)I look heavenwards and mutter, "does this mean my luck is changing? Please god?"

Then the previews starts, we want the Firefly preview but we get some good ones in its stead: "Batman Begins", "Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion The Witch & The Wardrobe" (which literally sent a chill down my spine, interesting since up until seeing the trailer had little interest in the film, now that is what a trailer is supposed to do), "Mr & Mrs. Smith", and a couple of others I can't recall off hand.

Next up the movie that I've been curious about since Return of the Jedi ended and I'd heard rumors about prequels being done.

Revenge of the Sith...

First off, I should state that I'd seen the emmy-winning animated series The Clone Wars - all 23 chapters. Revenge of the Sith starts literally after Chapter 23 of the Clone Wars and if you haven't seen these, you should. They are done by the same animators that did Samuri Jack and chapter 23 does a brilliant bit with cave paintings that literally describes Anakin Skywalker's journey. Whether or not you are a fan of Star Wars, check out these animated bits, each chapter is 15 minutes in length. Highly recommend. (Also highly recommend Animatrix for Matrix and non-Matrix fans, even if you hated the last two movies in the series, see it.) I saw Clone Wars for same reason I saw Animatrix - wanted to see the whole story. Seeing Sith without seeing Clone Wars is sort of like watching ATS without ever watching BTVS. If that makes sense.

Now...my review of Sith, which I will kindly cut tag for everyone, those who haven't seen it and don't want to be spoiled and those who could care less.


The Revenge of The Sith is the counterpart to Return of the Jedi, or it's shadow. One is the hero's journey, one is the tragic hero's fall. Both are well-known storytelling tropes, no George Lucas did not invent them, they've been around a long time. Good stories are about a character's transformation. The story shows us the character's journey, what happens to him, how he deals with it. How his choices along that journey change him, transform him for good or ill. How he deals with those choices. And his interaction with others who are on that journey with him.

For this to work, you have to build up to the choices, show why the character made the choices he or she did, the conflict within the character for them,
and how the character overcame that conflict.

Star Wars - is a three character piece. Han Solo - the reluctant hero, who overcomes his self-involvement to help Luke save the day. One of the best moments in the movie is the one when Han Solo shows up at the last minute and blows Darth off course, allowing Luke to destroy the Death Star. We don't know Han will do it. There is enough evidence in the film to show he'll go either way. (Why it is important that Han Solo shot first in the bar sequence, Han is shown to us as an opportunist, why come back and help Luke? Yet he bonds with Luke in the Death Star and with Leia.) Luke - the farmboy who yearns to be the fighter pilot and hero he believes his father was and get off the boring planet he fears he'll live his entire life on, he's basically the everyman who dreams of adventure. Leia - the princess who refuses to allow herself to get too close to anyone and has to have control, run the show. There is sexual tension between all three - and clearly both Han and Luke have feelings for Leia. Star Wars the film has, if you think back on it, very few action sequences. It's actually a very chatty picture. The film is set up around three major events: 1) the droids adventure on tatoonie and escape from Vader with Leia's message, Luke's solving of the message, meeting with Old Ben (Obi-Wan), meeting Han/Chewie and the Millenium Falcon as their means of escape from Tatoonie - we call this the introduction of key characters. The climatic moment - getting off Tattoonie 2) The prison breakout, which involves lots of chatting and problem-solving, the best sequences are getting stuck in the garbag shoot and dressing up as storm troopers. Then we have the brief light-saber battle and fight to get off the ship. The climatic moment when Vader kills Ben, causing Luke to feel alone, cut off from his last remaining piece of home/family, having to trust himself. 3) The battle for the death star - and Han's last minute reappearance - the wow moment.

What Star Wars does right? It focuses on the central characters:Han, Leia, Luke, Vader, Obiwan, CP30, Chewebaca and R2D2. That's it. It focuses on how these characters bond and work together to get out of sticky situations, how they overcome their personal conflicts to do so, and how this changes them.
They are different at the end of the movie.

Empire Strikes Back? Same deal. Again we have three main characters as the focus. All three start out in one place - end at another. Very few action sequences, lots of talking and buildup. The action happens at the climatic points and only lasts for fifteen minutes or less. 1) On the Ice Planet, we have the battle with the droids, and the escape - but that's only 15 min. Most of the beginning is Han and Leia worrying over Luke, Han reluctantly going back to find and save him. (It's important in each film, Han goes back and saves Luke and it's a struggle for him.) He saves him. Luke gets a kiss from Leia. Han is annoyed and decides to leave and gets roped into having to save Leia again. Luke goes off for training. (2.) Luke on Dagobah, Han and Leia running from Darth - get captured by Darth. Luke coming face to face with his fear of becoming Vader. Leaving training early to save Leia against Yoda and Ben's advice. 3) Han put in the carbon chamber after Leia finally admits she loves him. Luke failing to save Han, losing his hand, and finding out the father he'd worshipped in his heart is the demon he's been fighting all this time. Very little action here - only one long sword fight at the end, and even that is mostly talking.

Return of the Jedi- busy movie Jedi. Here's where things start to break down and become less story and more X-Box video game. Lots of action and not as much dialogue. 1) the prison break of Han (we don't see them plan it out, the film starts at the prison break, no build-up, we're already there and it's one action sequence followed quickly by another.) 2) They go to the Ewok place, again lots of action sequences, with one major talking scene around the campfire - this scene doesn't build character, tells us zip about Han, Leia or Luke - it's just about the Ewoks who up til now, we never met. Then we get a five minute sequence where Luke tells Leia they are twins, and another five minute one where Han gets jealous and says he'll be a good sport and leave and she says, no he's my brother...and he's going off to do his thing. 3) The battles, Luke fights the Emperor and Vader, Billy Dee Williams fights the air fight, Han and LEia fight Vaders forces on the Ewok planet which could be blown by the Death Star at any moment. So let's see ten action sequences in this section. Way too busy. But we still get some good climatic points, because we had the first two films.

Revenge of the Sith - suffers from the same problems that Return does. Over 75% of this movie is nothing but sword fights and ship fights. I felt like I was watching a video game. Very little dialogue in this film, and what little is there - is interspersed between action sequences. Also way too many characters. Instead of just focusing on this group: Palapatine, Padme, ObiWan, Yoda, Anakin, and Grievous. We have scenes with Senator Organa, Mace, Dooku, the Wookies, and countless others. It's a very busy movie. Most of the dialogue is speeches though. There are a few wonderful bits here - the bit where the Jedi counsel decides to use Anakin as a double agent, which made me mutter aloud, ah they created their own monster. And a wonderful speech by Palapatin to the Senate.

The story of Sith is actually an intriguing one. And Clone Wars moves nicely into it - in Clone Wars, the following things happen:

1. Anakin against Obi-wan's wishes follows a Sith to a planet, lands in her trap, and fights her almost to a standstill. Finally he kills her by giving into his rage and pain, instead of answering Obi-Wan's com message and leaving.

2. General Grievous kills over half the Jedis, and they fight him to a standstill trying to protect Palaptine. At least five Jedi sacrifice their lives to Grievous to save him. He is still captured. The two strongest JEdi, Mace and Yoda are distracted elsewhere in the city and arrive too late to stop it.
3. Obi-wan and Anakin travel to a planet to rescue a JEdi Light Sabre Crystal that has fallen into enemy hands. Something weird is going on on the planet. The male warriors keep disappearing. After killing a strange mutated beast again against Obi-Wan's wishes, Anakin is chosen as the latest warrior, he is tatooed with their emblem, and goes into the caves. In the caves, Anakin has a vision of a man who attempts to fight a mechanical monster, with a piece of it, protecting his princess and villagers by doing so, but the mechanical monster consumes him turning him into a part of it. Disturbed, he shakes this aside, and goes in to the center of the plant, only to discover that the crystal has tapped into the dark side of the force and is mutating the inhabitants of the planet, the male warriors, into mindless monsters who act on their passions. He manages to remove the manacles of one of the monsters, and it turns out they are not beyond redeemption, that they can act, even though deformed, as long as the crystal's negative influence is turned off. He reaches in with his mechanical arm and removes the crystal saving them - this segment is 20 minutes long.

Sith takes place directly after these two segments of Clone Wars. What hit me while watching Sith, was there was emotional build-up regarding character in the 15-20 minute Chapters of Clone Wars than in the 146 min Sith. Why? What did Lucas do wrong? And what does he do right?

What he does right is the political mindgames, the Jedi and Palaptine's back and forth. What does not work is there is no emotional build-up with the Padme/Obiwan/Anakin/Palaptine Quadrangle. Not really. In the final scene,where Padme and Obiwan fight for Anakin's soul - Anakin believes she's turned to Obiwan, loves Obiwan over him, which makes no sense. His jealousy of Obiwan doesn't quite play. It hasn't been built up to. Not the way that Han's for Luke was built up to in Star Wars and even Empire at times. We also don't get much of his internal battle.

What Lucas does right - is the irony. The fact that Anakin causes the very thing he fears the most - the death of Padme. That Anakin is his own worste enemy. Nice symmetry there. That the Jedi's cause the thing they fear most - Anakin's turn to the Sith, by their own decisions to use Anakin as a spy, to make Anakin a Jedi before he's ready, and by continuing,albeit unintentionally to fuel Anakin's anger at being overlooked. They give Anakin very little reason to trust him - while allowing Palaptine to get a stronger and stronger hold on both the Senate and Anakin. It's ironically amusing that the film starts with the Jedi's sacrificing everything to rescue Chancellor Palaptine from Dooku and ends with Palaptine killing the Jedis and sending them into exile, with the help of his rescuer, Anakin. Lucas' sense of irony works beautifully.

What Lucas does wrong? He forgets that the focus must always be on the characters, not the action. The action moves characters forward, not the other way around. I don't care when Padme dies, I should. I don't care about their love and I should. Why? I never see it. We don't get any sense of what their relationship is about here. No marriage. Just brief scenes, where they kiss, she asks him to be honest, he tells a nightmare, she looks anguished. Nothing meaty. Clearly Lucas could care less about romance, which is okay, but unfortunately the romance is the reason Lucas' uses for Anakin's turn to the Dark Side. And it doesn't play.

The sequence between ObiWan and Anakin at the end - the climatic battle, was beautifully shot, but far too long. It could have been shorter and far more gut-wrenching. Would have been too - if we'd built up more the relationship between Anakin/Padme/Obi-Wan. But you don't get a firm sense of any relationship between Padme and Obi-wan, certainly not enough of one for Anakin to be worried about. I didn't feel as much for Anakin as I wanted to. No, the character your heart goes out to is ObiWan. Ewan McGregor steals the movie.
He literally morphs into a young Alec Guiness in this film - you see the middle stage in that character's journey. The film was worth seeing for that.

When I look at Sith, and the later Matrix films - I see what went right, what went wrong and what might have been. I may be wrong, but I think the current obsession with violent video games has hurt action movies. They make the same mistakes so many amateur writers make - which is build to the big action sequence, make it all about the sword fights. (In the romance genre its building to the sex scenes.) The problem with that is the movie should not be about the great sword fight. Now in Sith the climatic sword fight does physically transform Anakin into Vader, it does change him. But he's changed before that fight. The fight is actually anti-climatic. Compare to the climatic sword fight between Vader and Luke in Empire - which ends with Luke truly being transformed - a huge wow moment for the viewer. No huge wow moments in Sith. I knew Anakin would lose, I knew he'd been physically damaged beyond repair. No the huge climatic moment is when Anakin attacks and almost kills Padme then goes after ObiWan to kill him. The fight is what the movie's been building up to - that's what the movie is about. Yet nothing is revealed in it. cjlasky told me he preferred Sith to Return, at the time, I agreed, now, thinking over it - I disagree. Return actually works better - again it's the big climatic moment - which is the battle between Luke/Vader and the Emperor. And that fight is more dialogue than fight, but the movies have been building to it and we get the reveal, the wow moment, which transforms everything - Luke appears to lose, the Emperor is killing him, and Vader kills the Emperor. That sequence alone is why Return is a better movie than Sith.

Did I like Sith? It was okay. It was what I more or less expected, having seen Phantom Menace and Attack of the Clones. Did I enjoy it as much as the first three? No. Course I was much younger then and you do look at things differently when you are younger. But I think even now, on an emotional/intuitive level I'd enjoy the earlier ones more. Why? The characters resonated with me. I felt them in my bones. Played with them in my mind. Cared what happened to them. Worried over them. And that's what it comes down to in every good story - at least for me - do I care about the characters? Do I feel their journey? Can I track it? Does it resonate? Yes or No.

Sith - I enjoyed for it's irony, for it's reflection on what happens later. Sith in an odd way makes the first three movies more interesting, gives them more texture, and for that I enjoyed Sith quite a bit.

Do I recommend it? I give it a B. Enjoyable. Worth $5. Better than the other prequels.

Oh - here's my ranking of the Star Wars films: 1) Empire Strikes Back, 2) Star Wars, 3) Return of the Jedi, 4) Revenge of the Sith, 5) Attack of the Clones,
6) Phantom Menace.

(Oh if Clone Wars counts, put it between Jedi and Revenge.)

[identity profile] mamculuna.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 07:21 am (UTC)(link)
Exactly. I saw parts of clone wars even before Attack of Clones, and had much higher expectations for that movie, which needless to say weren't realized. Expect to be disappointed by Sith, but will see it just so I can talk about it, I think.