Updating my evil fanfic - Miss Edith's Revenge

After much thought and some discussion, I decided to re-write the Prologue of my evil fanfic, develop one of the characters who appears in Chapter 1 and Chapter 3, a bit more.


So here it is - the new prologue, which is much longer and actually, ahem, does a few things I've never written or posted online in my life. Feeling a little nervous about posting this because of those little items.

Warning: graphic violence and character deaths ensue. No ships. Implied S&M sex in places. I tried to avoid doing it, but saw no way around it finally and took the plung. Ugh. Hope it works. Takes place after Season 7 BTVS. Some vague spoilers to Damage 5.11 ATS. NC-17 in sections, so if you are under 17? Sorry. Go away. The fanfic explores dark themes in Buffy and Angelverses.

( Prologue Part I, Drusilla's pov )

( prologue part II:Dawn's pov )

I tweaked a few things in Chapter 1 so it's slightly different now.

( Chapter 1: Xander )

For the rest you can check my past livejournal entries - here:http://www.livejournal.com/users/shadowkat67/37475.html#cutid1 (for Chapter 2 - Dana)

and here for Chapter 3 - Buffy -
http://www.livejournal.com/users/shadowkat67/38395.html#cutid1

Love feedback if you have it. My purpose for doing this is threefold:
1. deal with my frustration and writers block
2. build on my writing muscles, work out the kinks in a safe environment
3. deal with issues that have arisen in the shows and I haven't seen anyone deal with - things that bug me

Thanks muchly to those who are reading.